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Days of Thunder (1990)
IMDB rating: 5.40
Plot: Cole Trickle enters the high-pressure world of Nascar racing. He’s a hot driver with a hot temper, and this attitude gets him into trouble not only with other drivers, but members of his own team as well.
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Directors: Scott Tony
Actors: Cruise Tom,Duvall Robert,Quaid Randy,Elwes Cary,Rooker Michael,Thompson Fred Dalton,Reilly John C.,Quinn J.C.,Simpson Don,Ellis Chris,Appel Peter,Ayers Stephen Michael,Action,Drama,Romance,Sport,
is this a good intro for a story i am writing?
sometimes, reality escapes the mind, and crawls into the dark caves of your inner mind. this is me today. i am losing my grip on reality. i know i am in the shower, but not standing, and letting the water hit the back of my neck and stream down my face. my eyes are closed.
i am now in a florida thunder storm. i am laying on the beach with the warm water pounding my back. i am holding hands with HIM. i am laughing with HIM. i am kissing Him. my hair is starting to curl from the humidity, and it is sopping wet. my warm, tan skin, is starting to get goosebumps, because of the rain. and i am smiling, a big pearly white smile showing gums and everything. i am happy. i am happy because i can smell the sea salt, hear the waves hit the point of rocks, and happy because he is here. i can smell his cologne, fading away with the rain. it is fading, fading…
my eyes are open now. reality is front and center, gluing itself there. i am so dazed, and confused. where is the rain, where is he? but i know, that i am here. and i am alone.
i really should not be alone right now, who knows what i would do to myself? i am in a cold gloomy state, away from sunny florida, and my boyfriend died. i am not sure, is this the reason mom moved us so fast? i am thirteen, its not like we were really serious, but at the same time we were.
we came from dysfunctional families; i was from a divorced family, my dad was in chicago with his wife, and my mom moved around from one abusive relationship to another abusive relationship. he was trapped in a foster home with seven other kids. we helped each other so much. he wasn’t in the relationship for kissing or popularity, he was there to love me and hold my hand. we were in our only perfect world. we had perfect grades, good friends, and each other. what was there to lose?
i now know what there was to lose; his life.
he never told me he had cancer, or that he had been dying away for seven years, and he never once let on to the pain he was in. he never told me that he wanted to die, or that he was sick of trying to get better and getting more bad news. i guess, if i had known, he would still be alive. he would be alive and healthy, and i would have never had to see him die. we could have broken up after a week like every other couple in eighth grade and moved on and flirted in the hallways. but i guess our world wasn’t that perfect.
i stand up now, jump out of the shower, and lay on the cool tile with a towel wrapped around me. i wasn’t always so messed up. if you saw me walking down the street you would think, "Wow, she looks fun to be around!" i am not a typical girl with fake tan skin and platinum hair, instead i have a deep tan from my olive skin, and dark brown hair. i have hazel eyes and a petite build. now a days, people at school will strike up a conversation with me, and then walk away after two minutes. is it because i am intellectual? maybe my sarcasm? only he, aaron, understood my sarcasm.
as a matter of fact, aaron understood everything about me. and i understood him. at the end when he was really sick and his hair was gone he told me i was special, and to never let that go. he made me promise. how can i keep this promise when i am falling apart?
**********also who could play the main girl "Abigail, or abbey" she is thirteen. and who would play aaron? he has tan skin, blonde hair, and brown eyes around 13 or 14???******************
It’s pretty good, but there are a lot of mistakes. You need to fix your capitalization errors and then it will be fine.
Juliet's Melody | Feb 07, 2010
I couldn’t finish this. It sounds like a preschooler wrote it and itt needs a lot of improvement. Good luck.
glitterandtrains | Feb 07, 2010
This is fabuloss seriously I think you are amazing you should keep writing! I don’t know anuy actors that can play them but this is an awsome begining!! Do you mind posting more? Lol
Alex | Feb 07, 2010
It’s pretty good. Just fix up a few mistakes and maybe be more descriptive or something and you’ll be set.
Tiffany | Feb 07, 2010
No, and I’ll explain why: this entire thing is a background summary! There’s not enough narration. You can reduce it all to about five sentences. "I’m thirteen. I’m suffering from a tragic relationship with a guy who had cancer. We just had too many differences. Now I’m in a shower and full of angst." Think of the beginning few pages of some of your favorite books. I’ll use Twilight as an example:
My mother drove me to the airport with the windows rolled down. It was eventy-five degrees in Phoenix, the sky a perfect, cloudless blue. I was wearing my favorite shirt
