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Forbidden Warrior (2004) IMDB rating: 3.10 Plot: Forbidden Warrior is structured loosely on a popular Asian myth. The story concerns Seki (Marie Matiko), an attractive woman who discovers that she can utilize an ancient book of spells in order to accomplish just about anything. She must master these spells before the book falls into the hands of those who mean to do some serious damage with it.

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Rate my Monarch deck please???!! (advanced format)?
now i trying to make deck monarch n with some flip effect 4 star monster!! rate / fix please!!

Monster :
granmarg
Mobius
caius 2x
zaborg
Raiza 2x
Kuraz
chaos Sorcerer
Jinzo

legendary jujitsu master 2x
Twin headed behemoth 2x
Man eater bug
hane-hane
cyber dragon
jester confi
breaker the magical warrior
wall of illusion
D.D scout plane
spirit reaper
Tragoedia
night assailant
mask of darkness

(i think with the flip effect 4 lv monster are great with the monarch)

SPELLS :

MST
Dimensional fissure 2x
Fissure
creature swap
soul exchange 2x
heavy storm
sword of revealing light
brain control

TRAP :

Gozen Match (i think its good 1 vs 1 with monarch!!)
Limit Impulse (Token that can be tribute!!)
Bottomless Trap Hole 2x (its good 4 annoying synchro monster)
Trap disablement
Trap Hole
Sakuretsu Armor
Compulsory (another kick back monster)
Dimensional Prison 2x (its worst than sakuretsu)
Waboku
call of haunted (its become the best while M.Reborn n Premature become forbidden)

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Here is My Version that had won me duels against Lightsworns all the time (went 10-3 against Lightsworns, 4-4 against Blackwings, 2-2 against Gladiator Beast. Even though this deck may seem odd at first with more S/T than Monsters it is necessary to slow your opponent down to a crawl while you keep gaining advantages through, more monsters on field (Macro Cosmos + Scout Plane+ D.D Survivor), them drawing the same card (J. Master and Raiza), having to summon the monster the next turn instead (compulsory), losings Monsters (Control cards, Tragoedia, etc…), and your Monarchs all at the same time making your strategy very deep.

"Compulsory Macro-Monarchs"

Monsters: 19

1x Gorz the Emissary of Darkness / Tragoedia perfered (for control)
3x Caius The Shadow Monarch
3x Raiza The Storm Monarch
1x Mobius The Frost Monarch
1x Cyber Dragon
3x D.D scout plane
3x D.D Survivors
2x Legendary Jujitsu Master (Cyber Valley / Kycoo depending on who and how you play)
1x Marshmallon
1x Morphing Jar

Spells: 10

3x Dimensional Fissure
2x Allure of Darkness
1x Enemy Controller
1x Soul Exchange
1x Brain Control
1x Heavy Storm
1x MST

Traps: 11

3x Compulsory Evacuation Device (slows your opponent down / reuse of Monarchs)
2x Macro Cosmos
2x Bottomless Trap Hole
1x Mirror Force
1x Torrential Tribute
2x Royal Oppression

Side 15

3x Mirror of Oaths
2x Cyber Valley
2x Kycoo the Ghost Destroyer
2x D.D. Warrior Lady
2x Threatening Roar
2x Dark Bribe
2x My Body as a Shield

Chilaxin' | Jan 13, 2010

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lol, if it’s a monarch deck, put more monarch into it. People build certain type decks because the cards support one another.
Qing | Jan 13, 2010

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Horrible!

Better Deck List:
Monsters : (20)
3x Caius The Shadow Monarch
3x Raiza The Storm Monarch
1x Mobius The Frost Monarch
1x Cyber Dragon
1x Spirit Reaper
1x Marshmallon
1x Treeborn Frog
1x Sangan
2x Snowman Eater
3x Gravekeeper’s Spy
1x Legendary Jujitsu Master
1x Breaker the Magical Warrior
1x Dandylion

Spells: (11)
1x Brain Control
1x Soul Exchange
1x Lightning Vortex
1x Mystical Space Typhoon
1x Heavy Storm
2x Book of Moon
1x Smashing Ground
2x Fissure
1x Pot of Avarice

Traps : (9)
2x Bottomless Trap Hole
1x Mirror Force
1x Torrential Tribute
2x Dimensional Prison or Threatening Roar
1x Solemn Judgment
1x Call of the Haunted

OR

Try Macro Monarchs!

Monsters: (19)
3x Caius The Shadow Monarch
3x Raiza The Storm Monarch
2x Kycoo The Ghost Destroyer
1x Cyber Dragon
2x D.D scout plane
3x D.D Survivors
3x Gravekeeper’s Spy
1x Legendary Jujitsu Master
1x D.D Warrior Lady

Spells: (12)
2x Fissure
3x Dimensional Fissure
1x Lightning Vortex
1x Mystical Space Typhoon
1x Heavy Storm
2x Book of Moon
1x Brain Control
1x Smashing Ground

Traps: (9)
3x Macro Cosmos
1x Return from teh diffrent dimension
2x Bottomless Trap Hole
1x Solemn Judgment
1x Dimensional Prison
1x Mirror Force
Jimmy | Jan 13, 2010

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Your missing one monarch. You should try to fit all 7 into it. You also need more ways to get the monarchs out, since the way most of your regular monsters function, they probably won’t be out more then a turn.

Also, how many cards are in this deck? I didn’t feel like counting, but it looks like quite a few. Try to get your deck around 40-48 cards.
Derek | Jan 13, 2010

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Actually I think that Gozen match is a horrible card in a monarch deck seeing as they all have different attributes, I also think that without more D.D. Scout Planes and D.D. Survivor the Dimensional Fissures are not needed. You should also throw in The Tricky to use as tributes for the monarchs. Another idea would be to put in some tuners and synchro monsters since most of the monarchs are level 6 Krebons would be a great bet to get some good level 8 synchros like Stardust Dragon.
ltorres666 | Jan 13, 2010

Anacondas: The Hunt for the Blood Orchid (2004) IMDB rating: 4.10 Plot: In New York, the ambitious Dr. Jack Byron and his associate Gordon Mitchell present the research of his assistant Sam Rogers to the CEO and board of directors of a corporation to sponsor a scientific expedition to Borneo. The objective is to find a flower, Blood Orchid, that flourishes for a couple of weeks every seven years and could be a fountain of youth, prolonging the expectation of life of human beings. They are succeeded and once in Borneo, they realize that it is the raining season and there is no boat available to navigate on the river. They pay US$ 50,000.00 to convince Captain Bill Johnson and his partner Tran to sail to the location. After an accident in a waterfall, the survivors realize that a pack of anacondas have gathered for mating and their nest is nearby the plantation of Blood Orchid, which made them bigger and bigger.

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what kind of rifle is the guy on the cover of the movie "Anacondas: The Hunt for the Blood Orchid"?
its not the picture on wikipedia

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My Guess would be a Savage model 111

Kimber45c | Nov 28, 2009

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I can tell you for certain it’s not a fully automatic belt fed crew served cane toad machine gun. This much i know for sure.
Butch C | Nov 28, 2009

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IF IT CAN KILL AN ANACONDA IT WILL PROLLY KILL A CANE TOAD SO MY GUESS IS A POTATO GUN!
Mountain Man | Nov 28, 2009

Batman: Gotham Knight (2008) IMDB rating: 7.10 Plot: Anime-inspired direct-to-DVD anthology film. Comprised of six short stories, from diverse creators, including Academy Award-nominated Josh Olsen (A History of Violence), Batman Begins writer David S. Goyer, and comics scribe Brian Azzarello. It’s planned for a release window of two to four weeks prior to the release of The Dark Knight, and would bridge the gap between Batman Begins and The Dark Knight.

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Batman continuity retcons?
I’ve only been reading Batman comics for a year & have built up quite a collection, but I really need to get my shit straight with what is & is not in canon.

I realize that an entire series or graphic novel can be out of continuity but still have something canon in it, like….Batman Confidential now trumps Legends of the Dark Knight &….in The Killing Joke, the Joker’s origins were retconed but what he did to Barbara still stands.

I’ve also been told that while Batman Adventures, Batman & Robin, & Gotham Adventures pertain to the DC Animated Universe, the Harley Quinn series connects to it.

So what’s in & what’s out? Partialy or completely? This includes graphic novels & related series like Azrael: Agent of the Bat, Gotham Knights, Last Laugh, Salvation Run, Shadow of the Bat, Gotham Central, Emperor Joker, Dark Victory, No Man’s Land, The Long Halloween, Batman Cacophony, Gotham Girls, Countdown/Crisis (I get all of them mixed up).

You can make your explanations as long as you want. I run a fanclub for girls getting into comics & I don’t want to spoon-feed them the wrong information.

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*Cracks fingers* Hoo-boy, I’m not going to waste time here so here we go!

Now, the first thing you have to understand is that after the following events ‘Infinite Crisis’ and ‘Crisis on Infinite Earths,’ occured, many charactesr were retconned. These events were just cheesy things made up by DC to get their character’s histories and powers straight which is especially why the DCU is one of the most confusing universes in the history of comics. The first and easiest method is trying to locate the ‘Elseworlds’ tag on the cover. If the Elseworlds tag is there, that means it’s an alternate-universe one-shot and not canon. A few examples do not have the Elseworlds tag however, such as the Dark Knight Returns, which was published before the Elseworlds tag was introduced.

The main series within the main Batman continuity (and canon) includes the following:

-Batman
-Batman: Confidential
-Streets of Gotham
-Batman and Robin
- Detective Comics
- Gotham City Sirens
- Red Robin
- Azrael
- Batgirl

Other miniseries titles such as Cacophony and the Widening Gyre are part of continuity too. Several series you refer too have already been cancelled including Legends of the Dark Knight, Shadow of the Bat, and Gotham Central which are all canon. The rest you mention in your fourth paragraph are all part of the main canon too. Note that the DCAU is a SEPERATE canon, meaning that the Batman Adventures is not of the mainstream canon.

Now, regarding the Killing Joke, you have to understand that there is no true origin for the Joker. Sometimes he tells it one way and other times the other and the point is that the origin is simply left up to the reader’s imagination. Alan Moore tried to complexify it abit with that story, but I wouldn’t ponder too much on that. If you’re ever confused, look up the Batman article on Wikipedia. Scroll down to the ‘Links to Related Articles’ section and open it. Under ‘Batman Publications and storylines’ will be a compulsive list divided into categories such as canon, out-of-cannon, crossovers, etc.

I hope this helps you, and props to you for making a girls comic-book fan-club too! Cheers.

Juliu$ | Sep 08, 2009

Attack Force (2006) IMDB rating: 2.50 Plot: Marshall Lawson loses his strike-team in a cold-blooded and seemingly random attack. After this he takes it upon himself to investigate the suspicious circumstances of the brutal killings. Soon he uncovers CTX Majestic, a covert military operation so secret, that now the military wants Marshall eliminated. Resolute in his pursuit, Marshall engages in a merciless battle with a drug dealer operation that appears to be secretly funded by a rogue arm of the military.

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GLADIATOR BEAST DECK! RATE/FIX?
So. I made a gladiator beast not too long ago. I usually just duel my buddies but, what should I add or take out to make it tournement ready?

Fusions:
Gladiator Beast Heraklinos
Gladiator Beast Gyzarus
Gladiator Beaste Giodiaz

Monsters:22
Rescue Cat
Test Tiger x3
Gladiator Beast Secutor x1
Gladiator Beast Beastari x2
Gladiator Beast Darius x2
Gladiator Beast Spartacus x1
Gladiator Beast Equeste x1
Gladiator Beast Samnite x1
Gladiator Beast Homplomus x1
Gladiator Beast Laquari x2
Sangan x1
Moja x1
Goblin Attack Force x1
Turbo Booster x1
Mask of Darkness x1
Vortex Trooper x1

Magic:10
Gladiator Proving Ground x2
Gladiator Beast Battle Archfiend Shield x2
Gladiator Beast Respite x1
Enemy Controller x1
Cold Wave x1
Swords of Revealing Light x1
Giant Trunade x1
Nobleman of Crossout x1

Traps:8
Dust Tornado x1
Double Tag Team x1
Soul Rope x1
Parry x1
Defense Draw x1
Gladiator Beast War Chariot x1
Waboku x1
Raigeki Break x1

I know im missing some magic and trap support. Just kinda hard to get.

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won’t rate it because it will break your heart. First, you need to improve your dueling skill. Here’s some great website to help you.

http://yugioh.tcgplayer.com/db/article.a sp?id=2319
http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Basic_Gamep lay_FAQ
http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Intermediat e_Gameplay_FAQ
http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Advanced_Ga meplay_FAQ
http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Expert_Game play_FAQ
http://forum.tcgplayer.com/showthread.ph p?t=215039

PLAY THE DECK BELOW ONLY IF YOU FINISHED READING ALL THESE ARTICLES

GLAD - See Huang Yeem
Location: 2010 SJ Los Angeles - 9th - 16th Place
Courtesy of: Konami

1 Blackwing - Gale the Whirlwind
1 Gladiator Beast Bestiari
1 Gladiator Beast Darius
2 Gladiator Beast Equeste
1 Gladiator Beast Hoplomus
3 Gladiator Beast Laquari
1 Gladiator Beast Murmillo
1 Gladiator Beast Retiari
1 Gorz the Emissary of Darkness
2 Thunder King Rai-Oh

2 Book of Moon
1 Brain Control
2 Dimensional Prison
2 Fissure
3 Gladiator Proving Ground
1 Mystical Space Typhoon
3 Shrink
1 Smashing Ground

2 Bottomless Trap Hole
1 Call of the Haunted
1 Dust Tornado
3 Gladiator Beast War Chariot
1 Mirror Force
1 Solemn Judgment
1 Torrential Tribute
2 Waboku
najid | Feb 09, 2010

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add a snipe hunter,it works really well with the gladiator beasts,it lets u flip a die and whatever number u get,all monsters on your opponents side with the same level number is destroyed.plus its 1500 attack points.
TheDuke14 | Feb 09, 2010

Judge Dredd (1995) IMDB rating: 4.60 Plot: The Year is 2139. The Planet Earth has changed into a virtually uninhabitable place called the “Cursed Earth”. All of the Earth’s population have crowded into the cities across the planet, now known as “Mega Cities”. The crimes in these “Mega cities” became so violent and so powerful, that the regular justice system was powerless to contain, then it collapsed completely. But, a new Justice System came from the ashes, They were 3 justice systems in 1 (Police, Jury and executioner), they were called “Judges”. In Mega City 1 (formarly, New York), There was a Judge, named Joseph Dredd, who was the toughest and most stringent Judge in history. One day, he was charged with murder. He was tried and sentenced to life in prison because of it. Then, Dredd found out that it was in fact a person who shares his DNA. Former Judge Rico. Now, Dredd has to find out what Rico is planning to do, and to discover about his past.

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Artist of The Day: Chris Cunningham?
he. might. be. a. genius.

Director Chris Cunningham’s work in music video, commercial, and video art are well known and loved. Cunningham first made a name for himself in the early 90’s in the art departments of major motion pictures, designing robots and creatures for Clive Barker and David Fincher. His work on Judge Dredd propelled him, in 1995, to work with the late Stanley Kubrick on his then-unfinished project A.I. (which was picked up by Speilberg).

While working with Kubrick, Cunningham directed his first music video, Autechre’s Second Bad Vilbel. What followed was a series of videos with various alternative English rock bands where Cunningham learned the ropes of filmmaking.

In 1997 Chris Cunningham directed the orgiastic mind-fuck known as Come to Daddy, a video which landed him squarely on the radar of every artist on the planet. Over the next two years Cunningham directed six videos and seven commercials, each with their own brand of genius.

In 2000 Cunningham directed two short films for the Anthony D’Offay Gallery titled flex and Monkey Drummer. Those works showed a very modern and hyper-realistic take on the world.

In 2005 Cunningham released Rubber Johnny, a six-minute short that showed just how disturbing a vision Chris has. It came released with a book whose photos are definitely unsafe for work.

Since then, the Englishman has helmed a video for garage rock band the Horrors. He also famously attempted an adaptation of William Gibson’s cyberpunk novel Neuromancer, as well as an adaptation of the comic RanXerox. He is reportedly currently working on one or more feature films.

His Work:

Photographs(Orange)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aHoqUG8R3 aw&feature=related

Rubber Johnny
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vXyIB2L52 Dc

Only You(Portishead)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8wk2DqAfP Uk

Whatever(Telecom Italia)
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Mental Wealth(PSP/Sony)
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Come To Daddy(Aphex Twin)
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Flora(Gucci)
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What do you think?

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i’ve heard of him through aphex twin. i can’t even begin to count how many times i’ve watched Rubber Johnny. didn’t know that much else about him, but he’s definitely worthy of being called a "genius"

Waltzing Matilda | Jul 09, 2009

Rogue (2007) IMDB rating: 7.00 Plot: An idyllic wildlife cruise disintegrates into terror when a party of tourists are stalked by a massive man-eating crocodile. Pete McKell, a cynical American travel writer, joins a disparate group of holiday-makers on a river cruise through the waters of Kakadu National Park. Initially Pete clashes with their tour captain, Kate, a feisty young woman who assumes he is just another ‘city-slicker’ in search of a quick thrill. After an uneventful day cruising the river, Kate is reluctantly persuaded to steer their boat into unexplored territory. They discover a secluded lake but terror strikes when their craft receives a powerful blow from beneath the murky depths and begins to sink. With little choice, she beaches the vessel on the closest dry land -a tiny mud island. With a rising tide and only half an hour of daylight left, fear grips the group as they realize they are trapped in the lair of a ‘rogue’ crocodile, governed only by its need to hunt and kill. Begrudgingly, Pete and Kate join forces to keep hysteria at bay and in the process start to see beyond their initial impressions. Their first attempt to escape fails, but then Pete has an idea - they must trap the crocodile to enable the group to flee to the other side of the island whilst Kate swims for help. Pete volunteers to stand guard, but without warning, the beast breaks free and targets Kate who fails to resurface. As darkness descends and the muddy waters rise, a terrifying struggle ensues with only one probable outcome death.

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Will Al Gory & Osama bin Laden make a good tag team in battling "Global Warming"?
Osama bin Laden has joined Al Gore and other warmists to condemn the U.S. as a rogue nation for its alleged contribution to global warming.
In the tape that would make Al Gore proud, Osama echoed Gory by saying "drastic solutions" are needed to stop global warming

Living & Dying (2007) IMDB rating: 4.70 Plot: Two killers turn the tables on a trio of robbers when they find themselves in a hostage situation. Surrounded by the police, the robbers must become the heroes before the killers execute everyone.

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need help finding volunteer work….?
so im 15 years old and i live in the san bernardino mountains in california and im trying to find volunteer work helping teens my age deal with grief and death
and if your wondering why grief and death its because in the last 3 years ive had 3 of my best friends die from car accidents suicide and drug overdose and they were all under the age of 18 so i want to help teens get through what im trying to get through

Capers (2008) IMDB rating: 8.80 Plot: Three teams of criminals share the same Brooklyn block, but each exists in a separate genre of film. The Amateurs are trapped in a 1970’s anti-hero movie. The Sputniks live in black and white. The Moolies can’t escape their rap video life. But they all share a hatred of Connie, a racist local pawn shop owner and mafia widow. So when Connie has a heart attack, each team decides it’s time to find out what’s inside her legendary safe. Unfortunately they all plan their big score for the same night.

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i need a recipe for chicken piccata?
a creamy recipe, with capers ! needs to have capers and shoud be creamy. i found this picture..
http://village-idiots.org/photos/d/703-2 /Banana+Leaf+Cafe+chicken+piccata+2.jpg
..but i dont know the recipe. anyways. i want it to look like the picture

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Chicken Piccata

2 cups Chablis wine OR other very dry white wine
1 1/2 tsp. fresh-squeezed lemon juice
1 Tbls. real butter
2 cups heavy whipping cream
2 tsp. fresh minced thyme OR 1 tsp. dried thyme
1/2 tsp. salt
1/2 tsp. ground black pepper
2 - 2 1/2 lbs. boneless, skinless chicken breasts
2 Tbls. olive oil OR vegetable oil
8 oz. sliced fresh mushrooms
2 lemons

Days of Thunder (1990) IMDB rating: 5.40 Plot: Cole Trickle enters the high-pressure world of Nascar racing. He’s a hot driver with a hot temper, and this attitude gets him into trouble not only with other drivers, but members of his own team as well.

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is this a good intro for a story i am writing?
sometimes, reality escapes the mind, and crawls into the dark caves of your inner mind. this is me today. i am losing my grip on reality. i know i am in the shower, but not standing, and letting the water hit the back of my neck and stream down my face. my eyes are closed.

i am now in a florida thunder storm. i am laying on the beach with the warm water pounding my back. i am holding hands with HIM. i am laughing with HIM. i am kissing Him. my hair is starting to curl from the humidity, and it is sopping wet. my warm, tan skin, is starting to get goosebumps, because of the rain. and i am smiling, a big pearly white smile showing gums and everything. i am happy. i am happy because i can smell the sea salt, hear the waves hit the point of rocks, and happy because he is here. i can smell his cologne, fading away with the rain. it is fading, fading…

my eyes are open now. reality is front and center, gluing itself there. i am so dazed, and confused. where is the rain, where is he? but i know, that i am here. and i am alone.

i really should not be alone right now, who knows what i would do to myself? i am in a cold gloomy state, away from sunny florida, and my boyfriend died. i am not sure, is this the reason mom moved us so fast? i am thirteen, its not like we were really serious, but at the same time we were.

we came from dysfunctional families; i was from a divorced family, my dad was in chicago with his wife, and my mom moved around from one abusive relationship to another abusive relationship. he was trapped in a foster home with seven other kids. we helped each other so much. he wasn’t in the relationship for kissing or popularity, he was there to love me and hold my hand. we were in our only perfect world. we had perfect grades, good friends, and each other. what was there to lose?

i now know what there was to lose; his life.

he never told me he had cancer, or that he had been dying away for seven years, and he never once let on to the pain he was in. he never told me that he wanted to die, or that he was sick of trying to get better and getting more bad news. i guess, if i had known, he would still be alive. he would be alive and healthy, and i would have never had to see him die. we could have broken up after a week like every other couple in eighth grade and moved on and flirted in the hallways. but i guess our world wasn’t that perfect.

i stand up now, jump out of the shower, and lay on the cool tile with a towel wrapped around me. i wasn’t always so messed up. if you saw me walking down the street you would think, "Wow, she looks fun to be around!" i am not a typical girl with fake tan skin and platinum hair, instead i have a deep tan from my olive skin, and dark brown hair. i have hazel eyes and a petite build. now a days, people at school will strike up a conversation with me, and then walk away after two minutes. is it because i am intellectual? maybe my sarcasm? only he, aaron, understood my sarcasm.

as a matter of fact, aaron understood everything about me. and i understood him. at the end when he was really sick and his hair was gone he told me i was special, and to never let that go. he made me promise. how can i keep this promise when i am falling apart?

**********also who could play the main girl "Abigail, or abbey" she is thirteen. and who would play aaron? he has tan skin, blonde hair, and brown eyes around 13 or 14???******************

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It’s pretty good, but there are a lot of mistakes. You need to fix your capitalization errors and then it will be fine.
Juliet's Melody | Feb 07, 2010

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I couldn’t finish this. It sounds like a preschooler wrote it and itt needs a lot of improvement. Good luck.
glitterandtrains | Feb 07, 2010

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This is fabuloss seriously I think you are amazing you should keep writing! I don’t know anuy actors that can play them but this is an awsome begining!! Do you mind posting more? Lol
Alex | Feb 07, 2010

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It’s pretty good. Just fix up a few mistakes and maybe be more descriptive or something and you’ll be set.
Tiffany | Feb 07, 2010

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No, and I’ll explain why: this entire thing is a background summary! There’s not enough narration. You can reduce it all to about five sentences. "I’m thirteen. I’m suffering from a tragic relationship with a guy who had cancer. We just had too many differences. Now I’m in a shower and full of angst." Think of the beginning few pages of some of your favorite books. I’ll use Twilight as an example:

My mother drove me to the airport with the windows rolled down. It was eventy-five degrees in Phoenix, the sky a perfect, cloudless blue. I was wearing my favorite shirt

xXx (2002) IMDB rating: 5.50 Plot: Xander Cage is your standard adrenaline junkie with no fear and a lousy attitude. When the US Government “recruits” him to go on a mission, he’s not exactly thrilled. His mission: to gather information on an organization that may just be planning the destruction of the world, led by the nihilistic Yorgi.

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Guy problems, Who should i pick?
Well which guy would you pick?

1) Known as a huge player. Always gets with tons of girls, But has apparently changed from meeting you. Very skinny and looks 4/10. 1 year older and left school at 16, but has been really nice to me and really likes me

2) Nice guy, smart, still at school, looks 5/10. 1 year older, But also known as a bit of a player, But also like me and is really nice and chatty to me. Popular in the year above. Has a car (:

3)1 year younger, Looks 10/10 body 10/10. Also known as a player, but generally a nice guy. However i did used to flirt with his brother. Also likes me.

4) Also 1 year younger. Looks 7/10 body 6/10 but really sweet, nice guy, but a bit clingy. Also likes me.

I need to pick one? They all like me and are all really nice. PLEASE help (:
xxx
I dont know if i would want to go out with someone younger :/ Im 15 btw x

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Number 4. You never want to go out with a player. Number 4 seems like a sweet guy, and he’s a 7/10! That’s great.
gracie | Feb 07, 2010

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I don’t understand why you have to rely on strangers giving their opinion. Don’t you have a mind of your own?
Satan Claws | Feb 07, 2010